SayPro Business Model Pitching: Feedback Form.

Event Name: SayPro Monthly Business Model Pitching
Event Date: January 21st – January 30th, 2025
Participant: _________________________
Pitch Title/Business Name: _________________________
Judge’s Name: _________________________

Purpose

The SayPro Feedback Form is a structured document designed to help judges provide detailed, actionable feedback to participants after they present their business models. This form ensures that feedback is consistent, focused, and constructive, and it provides participants with clear guidance on how to improve their business ideas and presentations. The form includes sections for evaluating key aspects of the pitch, such as innovation, market potential, financial sustainability, scalability, execution, and presentation quality.

Feedback Sections

1. Innovation and Uniqueness (Score: 1-5)

Strengths:

• What aspects of the business model or product/service stood out as innovative or unique?
• Were there any new approaches, technologies, or ideas introduced?

Suggestions for Improvement:

• Could the business be more innovative or offer a more distinct solution?
• What could be done to make the product/service more differentiated from competitors?

2. Market Potential (Score: 1-5)

Strengths:

• Was the target market well-defined?
• Was there clear evidence of demand for the product or service?

Suggestions for Improvement:

• Are there any untapped markets that should be explored?
• How could the market size and customer base be better addressed or expanded?

3. Business Model and Revenue Generation (Score: 1-5)

Strengths:

• How clear and sustainable is the business model?
• Was there a well-articulated revenue generation strategy?

Suggestions for Improvement:

• Are there any alternative or additional revenue streams that could be explored?
• How could the business model be refined to ensure better financial sustainability?

4. Financial Sustainability (Score: 1-5)

Strengths:

• Was the financial plan realistic, considering market conditions and the business model?
• Did the pitch include sound financial projections (e.g., revenue, costs, profits)?

Suggestions for Improvement:

• Are there any risks or assumptions in the financial plan that should be addressed?
• How could the business improve its financial projections or budget planning?

5. Scalability and Growth Potential (Score: 1-5)

Strengths:

• Does the business model allow for rapid scaling and growth?
• Was there a clear plan for market expansion or increasing capacity?

Suggestions for Improvement:

• How could the business better position itself for scalability in the long term?
• Are there systems, processes, or technology that could be optimized for growth?

6. Team and Execution Capability (Score: 1-5)

Strengths:

• Did the team demonstrate relevant skills and experience to execute the business plan?
• Was there a strong understanding of the market and execution challenges?

Suggestions for Improvement:

• Are there any team skill gaps or areas for improvement in execution?
• How could the team better prepare for challenges and obstacles?

7. Presentation and Communication (Score: 1-5)

Strengths:

• Was the pitch clear, organized, and engaging?
• Did the presenter effectively communicate the value proposition and key business aspects?

Suggestions for Improvement:

• How could the presentation be made clearer or more persuasive?
• Were the visuals and supporting materials (e.g., pitch deck, slides) effective, and if not, how could they be improved?

8. Overall Assessment (Score: 1-5)

• How would you rate this business model overall, considering all aspects discussed above?

Strengths:

• Summarize the key strengths of the pitch and business model.

Suggestions for Improvement:

• Provide overall feedback on areas for improvement or aspects that need more attention or development.

9. Additional Comments

• Provide any further feedback or advice for the participant that could help them refine their business model, presentation, or execution.

Score Summary

10. Final Recommendations

• Based on your evaluation, do you recommend this business model for investment, further development, or partnership?
• If you have any specific conditions, opportunities for collaboration, or suggestions for future involvement, please provide them here.

Signature of Judge: _________________________
Date: _________________________

Conclusion

The SayPro Feedback Form is a critical tool for ensuring that participants receive meaningful feedback that can be used to refine their business models and improve their presentation skills. This form not only provides a structure for evaluating pitches but also gives judges a framework for offering actionable advice to help entrepreneurs succeed. By using this template, the SayPro Monthly Business Model Pitching event can deliver constructive feedback that empowers participants and contributes to their long-term success in the business world.